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I haven't finished the background, and many of you probably saw the line art in my journal, but I thought I'd post one of the few things I've managed to draw after the bottoms up.

I'm not even really sure where I'm going to put her. But at least she has tea.

I do so enjoy tea.

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:iconmarron:
I think you did a fantastic job with the overall look of the picture. The face is especially nice, as it the coloring of the hair and the folds of the fabric of her dress.

I really dig the chair she's sitting in, although I would perhaps push it in towards her bottom more because it looks like she's sliding off a bit.

The anatomy is really good except for one thing: there is something a little "off" about her top leg--and I think that it's that the knee needs to be turned outward more (in this case, toward the viewer). Right now, it looks like her knee is coming out of the side of her leg; you just need to move it more towards the left side of the image to line it up with the shin and it'll be fine. Other than that, fantastic job! It's a simple, yet beautiful piece.
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:iconquicksilvermad-jenn:
Lovely! I always love how you draw hands... And just looking at this makes me want to get up and make a cup of tea. It looks marvelous in color.

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:iconsagaxus:
I'm not sure if I can see it all properly because it's not letting me fullview, but I think she has two left feet.

Either that, or I need to give my specs a clean.

Other than that, I really like her dress :) I like how you've done the folds.
:iconjesidres:
Apparently, the file was corrupted for the larger image- I reuploaded and made the feet a little more non-left looking.
:iconicethehedgehog:
Everyone loves tea~


And monocles. Those are good too.

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Very pretty. I don't think it needs a background.

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I like her dress :)

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:iconsagaxus:
Ah, that's better. I can see it properly now. Great :)
:iconabruptlynatural:
She looks excellent, but the perspective of the chair is a little off. It looks, at least to me, as though the back of the chair might need to be moved a bit counter-clockwise.

I love her hands!

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:iconivydoor:
With tea, she can go anywhere. :)

Really gorgeous work, babe. I adore your coloring and detail work.
:iconstr4yk1tt3n:
she is so sweet and pretty!

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